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Response 1
I got
drawn into this idea of wanting to know what high school
students are taught in English courses. Would it help me as
a college teacher to know what the students were taught
before me so I could build on that or alter it, depending. I
asked my sister who is a sophomore in high school what she
has learned about coherence. At first I didn't think she
would know what the word was, but to my surprise she did and
she had just finished a unit on coherence. She explained it
as how she needs to make connections so the teacher can
follow her paper and always know where she is going and what
she is talking about. The ways the students are suppose to
accomplish this is be using connective words or phrases,
repetition and synonyms. For homework they were given
paragraphs that were missing connective words or phrases and
they were to insert them to make the paragraph easy to
understand. Is this standard of all high schools? I was
actually surprised because I don't remember learning about
coherence until college. Is it beneficial to see what the
students have learned about coherence, if anything, and
build upon that. I guess what I am really interested in is
the difference between high school senior English teachers
and FY college instructors. How are high school teachers
preparing their students for college and how much catch-up
do we as instructors do to fill in the gaps the HS teachers
left out? Are there some articles or research on this topic?
Response 2
From class discussion it seems that many
students have no clue when it comes to topic of coherence or
cohesion. Fleckenstein's activity seemed the most successful when
looking at what activities were in the articles. I think that
showing the students how important topic sentences are to a
paragraph or how the importance of details. I know that it is most
effective to use student examples in the classroom, so I was
thinking that when working one on one with the students I would use
my different colors for different ideas, but when in the classroom I
was Fleckenstein's activity to introduce the class to the idea of
coherence and cohesion. I also liked the idea of taking a student
paragraph and cutting it up and then having the students put
themselves in the right order. It seemed to make the classroom more
student centered and not lecture based which is something I want to
strive for.
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